She..
She’s here
She’s there
She’s everywhere
Her eyes have seen everything
She isn’t
What she used to be
Haven’t you seen her fall
Disgusted by her own embrace
All she does is hide
It’s the pretty face
That killed her
Not the person inside
No one
Would have stopped her
Not a single one
Who cared
These broken wings
Won’t fly no more
Cause of all the pain
She carried along
With her
The final release of pressure
Will give her back
Her strength
Flying to eternity
The road will never end
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It’s the pretty face
That killed her
Not the person inside – tis sad that some are jsut considered another pretty face because no one bothered to look inside and see who they really are.
suzicate said this on January 14, 2011 at 21:01
It is sad that people base so many things on appearance alone. There’s so much that goes on beyond a person’s surface.
brownpaperbaggirl said this on January 15, 2011 at 03:11
I absolutely agree with what the girls said…so very sad that no one look deep enough. Just beautiful my friend. oxo
buttercup600 said this on January 15, 2011 at 04:25
Very touching but extremely beautiful poem, hope she will fly again like an angel, a phoenix.
trisha said this on January 15, 2011 at 17:08
She…i hope people would understand that a single thought can change a whole world.
williewizzy said this on January 19, 2011 at 15:45
Touching poem. I enjoyed the last stanza!
poetryoftheasian said this on January 27, 2011 at 04:50
Very deep. I like it!
Mitchell said this on January 30, 2011 at 21:04
Beautiful! Nothing will stop her! :)
Currie Rose said this on February 7, 2011 at 18:52
A person’s looks are the first thing you see. You make a judgment based on that first look. We all do it. That is human nature. Whether we take the time to know the person beyond those looks is up to us.
I like to read things that make me really think.
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timkeen40 said this on February 13, 2011 at 03:59
you write so well.
keep wriitng…
wishing you the best.
share one piece with us today, make more friends…
bless you.
xx
Promising Poets Parking Lot said this on March 27, 2011 at 01:20